Draft of Open Letter

In this post, I will construct a draft of Project 4. Here is the link to it.

Wiertz, Sebastien. "Drafting." 03/04/2012 via Flickr. Attribution 2.0 Generic License. 

So, this rough draft is very, very rough, and I would really appreciate any feedback you have. In fact, the more things you would like to edit, the better. I am planning on editing a lot before I actually write the final, but anything is super helpful. Please disregard the bad writing, and give me your hones thoughts. This is just to get my main ideas down. Thanks!