Copy for Paragraph Analysis

In the following post, I will analyze my own QRG, paragraph by paragraph, to determine my own strengths and weaknesses within my own writing.

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After analyzing my own QRG, I recognize a few strengths in my writing. I develop the main point and it organizes itself naturally and neatly. However, there are still improvements I could make to carry out the natural flow. My ideas and transitions are decent enough, but still could use some work, because nothing is ever truly perfect. I feel that these improvements will also come naturally as I add tons of information and also improve the writing itself.

I also recognized a few weaknesses in my writing, too. I find that I don't really state the main point in each paragraph, but I develop the main point anyway. This is an issue because how are people supposed to know what the idea I am developing is. I think this stems from trying to avoid being redundant, because I do mention the controversy in the lead paragraph, but I should still include a main point at the beginning of each paragraph. I think the main thing I need to focus on currently is adding information, so that I can have more than one example in each case.

Here is a link to my "Copy for Paragraph Analysis" document.