Identifying Basic Grammar Patterns

In the following post, I will reflect on the use of grammar in my own writing. I'll be identifying the type of grammar I used in my longest paragraph in my QRG. The document can be found here.

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I realized that I use a lot of sentence structures without being aware of doing so. My writing could improve if I was aware of the different sentence structures I used and tried to vary and spread them out throughout my writing. I tend to write long sentences, rather than sweet and simple ones, and I think my aim there was to make sentences as dense as possible to load the reader with information. I feel like I should probably start to shorten them, just in fear of going on for a whole page in a single sentence. My writing would like a few simple sentences, so that it is easier to go through, and act more like the genre we are supposed to be writing in.