Saturday, September 26, 2015

Evaluation of Rhetorical Sources

In the following post, I will analyze three sources for my previous post on my research questions.

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Source 1 - Scientists discover key genetic difference in tumors that grow back which will lead to women being offered preventative drugs

Author- Sophie Borland, Health Correspondent for the Daily Mail. She is a reliable source because she has published a ton of health articles, mainly for the daily mail, and is a well-known journalist.

Audience- The audience in this case is the general public. The terminology in the article is not difficult to comprehend, and the things that are discussed are easy enough that an everyday person could understand.

Context- This article was published September 24, 2015, so this is very recent news. It's not even a week old, and contains a lot of good information to spread to the public, so that people can begin getting tested for that specific gene.

Source 2- The Breast Cancer Gene and Me

Author- Elizabeth Wurtzel, writer for the New York Times that personally suffered through breast cancer and has the gene that makes cancer relapse. She is a reliable source, based on her personal experience with the issue at hand.

Audience- The audience is the general public. The terminology is not difficult, and most people know what basic cancer treatments are, such as chemotherapy. A person reading this opinion article would understand everything discussed.

Context- This article was published September 25, 2015, so this is also very recent news. It's about a day old, and I'm pretty sure that it is in response to the announcement of the breast cancer gene to look out for and get tested for, as it could change the treatment you would normally receive for breast cancer.

Source 3 - Genetic clue to breast cancer relapses

Author- No author is given, and this article seems to give more facts than anything. It is from BBC News, though, so it is a credible and reliable source. The article touches on the recent announcement of the important breast cancer gene.

Audience- The audience is the general public, due to the fact that there is nothing but facts present in the article. The lack of author almost gives it a bit more credibility, and seems like it is intended to reach a larger audience of people.

Context- This article was published on September 25, 2015, so it is only a day old. It seems to be in response to the recent breast cancer gene detection announcement. Many of the articles seem to be wanting to spread the word to save lives.

Reflection

After looking at Chelsea and Alex's blogs, I feel decently comfortable with the articles I chose, but the only issue I see is that there is no real argument occurring within the topic I chose. I am going to continue on this topic anyway, because it is something I'm really interested in, but I am just going to predict this problem now. I think I did well enough with my analysis of my articles, but there is also some improvements I could make, like looking more into the background of the authors.

2 comments:

  1. You did a good job answering the prompts for this post. The sources you have discussed are pretty good. The one I found the most interesting was source 1, the "scientists discover key genetic difference in tumors..." This one seemed to be provide a lot of information from various people giving it more credibility. The least interesting source I found was the "genetic clue to breast cancer relapses." Maybe it's because I read source 1 first but it gives basically the same people but with a lot less information. Good job!

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  2. The second post was easily the most interesting to read, I found myself greatly attached to the story, partly due to my minimal knowledge on the topic. The first article is a great introduction to the topic, and has a well represented amount of information. However, I found the second option to contain a much more meaningful amount of emotional connection and information. The third option, was very similar to the first, but a little too sparse, as it is definitely a developing new story. I think it depends what direction you want to go for your project; the cancer patients or focusing on the new-found genetic difference.

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